Correspondence is an effective way to make requests and deliver specific information. Correspondence can be of several types: a cover letter of job applications, a memo, and an electronic mail message, etc. Correspondence has some advantages: legality in formal case, efficiency to inform the same message to many people, revising the message until it is correct, and the advantage that it can be reread.
  To write a good correspondence, you should also consider two writing constraints, audience and mechanics. When you consider the audience, you have to identify your audience and estimate what the audience knows about the subject. Then, you should answer yourself why the audience begins reading your correspondence and continues reading it. Finally, you have to also understand the situation that the audience reads correspondence. After considering audience, you could know that your correspondence should be no longer than one page and you should write the main points as quickly as possible. Besides audience, mechanics are another important constraint. If you make errors in your correspondence, each error costs you a notch of credibility with the reader.
  In the style of correspondence, there are also special considerations: organization, emphasis, clarity, and forthrightness. Having a beginning, middle, and ending is similar to the organization of reports and articles. To make the audience keep reading the correspondence, you should get to the point in the first paragraph or the first sentence if possible. The middle in the correspondence delivers the information as in reports and articles. Ending can go in several directions: presenting a summary and calling for action. You should choose appropriate ending for your correspondence’s goal.
  To emphasize details, placing those details in either the first or last sentence is one way to accent them in a letter or memo. In addition to emphasis, clarity is important in correspondence because audiences read it faster than other types of documents. For this reason, you should opt for shorter sentences and paragraphs than you would in a report. Usually, control of tone in correspondence is difficult, but you should be forthright in correspondence by using simple and straightforward words.
Chapter 11. Illustration: Creating the best design.

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  If you want to use illustrations effectively in your writing, you should keep your illustrations precise, clear, fluid, and familiar.
  Precision means having illustrations that best reflect the accuracy of the language. For the precision, you should avoid details that aren’t either self-explanatory or explained in your text.
  Clarity demands not only that your illustrations convey the information intended, but also that they do not convey any information unintended. To give appropriate information, you should assign your illustration a formal name and provide enough information, either in the text or in the illustration caption or heading. A well-written caption or heading does not only identify the illustration but also answers immediate questions that the illustration raises.
  Being fluid is also important. You have to smooth the transition between what you say and what you show. The best way to smooth this transition is to match the information in your text with what’s in your illustration. Being fluid also means placing illustrations so that they closely follow their text references.
  Finally, to make your illustrations familiar, you should consider what your audience does and doesn’t know. It can help you anchoring an unusual image so that the audience gains a sense of its size and orientation. Showing relative size of an image by including either a scale or familiar-sized image is a good way.
  When you create the best design by using above tips, your writing would be loved by your audiences.


  보다 쉬운 글의 이해를 위해 우리는 여러 가지 도표나 그림, 사진 등을 이용할 수 있습니다. 이때 이 시각적 자료들 역시 명확하고, 군더더기가 없어야 하며, 글과 부드럽게 이어져야 하는 동시에 친숙하게 받아들여 질 수 있어야 합니다.
  시각적 자료들이 명확해야 한다는 것은 언어로 치자면 말의 정확함을 반영해야 한다는 것입니다. 예를 들어, 시각적 자료들은 자료 스스로 설명 가능하거나 글 속에서 설명을 하고 있는 것이 아닌 모호함이 포함되어 있으면 안됩니다.
  군더더기가 없다는 것도 명확함과 비슷한 내용인데, 시각적 자료들은 필자가 전달하고자 하는 내용을 담고 있어야 함은 물론 이고, 필자가 의도하지 않은 정보들을 담고 있어서도 안됩니다.
  매끄러운 흐름은 시각적 자료의 활용에서도 중요한데, 이것은 시각적 자료와 글 사이의 연결이 부드러워야 함을 의미합니다. 그러기 위해서는 우선적으로 중요한 것이 시각적 자료가 글의 내용과 맞아야 합니다. 또한 자료의 위치는 최대한 글 속에서 설명하는 부분과 가까운 곳에 위치시키는 것이 좋습니다.
  마지막으로, 시각적 자료를 읽는 이에게 친숙하게 전달하기 위해, 읽는 사람이 무엇을 알고 무엇을 모르는지를 고려해야 합니다. 친숙하지 않은 그림 등은 크기나 방향을 알 수 있는 물건이나 척도를 함께 보여줌으로써 이해를 도울 수 있습니다.


Chapter 2. Structure: Organizing your documents.

If a man can group his ideas, then he is a writer. - Robert Louis Stevenson.

  An organization, which has a beginning, middle, and ending, is a basic format structure for general scientific documents, such as reports and articles. The beginning of a report or article serves a specific purpose: defining the work, showing why the work was done, giving background for understanding the work, and revealing how the work will be presented. The middle states what happened in the work, how it happened, what is the result, and what the result means. The ending analyzes the work and gives a future perspective.
  The beginning of a scientific document includes the title, summary, and introduction. The title is the single most important phrase of a scientific document. It identifies the field of study and separates the document from all other documents in that field. In a strong title, you give enough information to orient, but not too much information to confuse readers. When the purpose of writing is to inform, you could write a descriptive summary or informative summary. The descriptive summary tells what kind of information will occur in the document. The informative summary tells what results occurred in the work. In writing introduction, by the end of introduction, audiences expect answers to the following questions: what exactly is the work? Why is the work important? What is needed to understand the work? How will the work be presented?
  The middle or discussion of a scientific document simply presents the work. In writing the middle, you select a strategy that is appropriate for your audience, and then you reveal that strategy through your headings and subheadings.
  The ending of document provides closure. Readers expect an analysis of the most important results from the document’s discussion and a future perspective on the work. In addition, you supply back matter in the form of appendices and glossaries for your secondary audiences.



  시작, 중간, 끝으로 글을 구성하는 것은 일반적이면서 가장 좋은 방법이다. 시작부분은 수행한 작업을 정의하고, 왜 그 작업이 수행되었는지 이유를 밝히고, 그 작업을 이해하는 배경지식을 제공하고, 마지막으로 그 작업을 어떻게 설명할지를 드러내야 한다. 또한 중간부분은 작업에서 무엇이 어떻게 벌어졌는지를 설명해야 한다. 마지막으로 끝부분은 작업의 결과를 분석하고, 미래에 대한 전망을 제시해야 한다.
  시작부분은 제목, 요약, 도입부를 포함한다. 제목은 전체 문서에서 가장 중요한 한 문장을 사용하는 것이 좋다. 그 문장은 연구 분야가 어디인지 알려주어야 하고, 반대로 같은 연구 분야의 다른 많은 글들과 차별성을 나타내야 한다. 좋은 제목이란 충분히 정보를 전달하고 있어야 한다. 그러나 지나친 정보의 전달은 읽는 사람에게 혼동을 줄 수 있다는 것을 알아 두자. 글의 목적이 정보를 전달하는 것이라면, 묘사적 요약이나 정보 전달적 요약을 사용해야 한다. 묘사적 요약의 경우 앞으로 문서에서 어떤 정보들이 이야기 될지 알려준다. 반면, 정보 전달적 요약의 경우, 작업의 결과가 무엇이 될지를 알려준다. 도입부는 그 부분을 다 읽었을 때, 정확히 그 작업이 무엇이고, 왜 중요하고, 작업을 이해하기 위해 무엇이 필요한지, 또 작업이 어떻게 설명될 것인지를 알도록 작성되어야 한다.
  중간부분은 간단하게 말해서 작업을 설명한다. 이 부분에서 읽는 사람을 고려해서 적절한 전략을 사용해야 하고, 이 전략은 소제목이나 문단의 제목을 통해서 명확히 드러나도록 해야 한다.
  끝부분에서 읽는 사람은 중간부분에서 다룬 작업의 가장 중요한 결과의 분석과, 그 작업과 관련된 미래의 전망이 담겨 있기를 기대한다. 또한 부차적인 독자를 위한 참고 자료를 안내해주기를 바란다.
  각 부분이 위에서 설명한 역할을 잘 하도록 글을 작성한다면 기본적인 구조이지만 아주 훌륭한 문서를 작성할 수 있을 것이다.


Chapter 1. Introduction : Deciding where to begin.

But in science the credit goes to the man who convinces the world, not to the man to whom the idea first occurs. - Sir Francis Darwin.

  The reasons why scientific writing is difficult are considered in two ways. The first reason is the inherent complexity of the subject matter. The second reason is the inherent complexity of the language. There is no simplistic advice for scientific writing, but just its constraints are there: the audience for the document, the format, the mechanics and the politics.
  “efficiency” is the keyword in tailoring your writing to the audience. When the purpose of the writing is to inform, you should try to communicate the most amount of information in the least amount of reading time. When the purpose of the writing is to persuade, you should try to present logical arguments in the most convincing manner.
  You should assess the audience: who will read the document, what do the know about the subject, why will they read the document, and how will they read it. The questions teach you what background information to include, which terms to define, and which results to emphasize. And you should also think about format, mechanics, and politics. Format is the way the type is arranged on the page. Mechanics encompasses the rules of grammar and punctuation. Politics is most difficult to discuss. Staying honest is straightforward enough.
  Style comprises three elements: structure, language, and illustration. Structure is the strategy of a scientific document. Language is the way that words are used. Illustration is the meshing of figures and tables with the language.



  기술적인 내용의 문서 작성은 주제 자체의 어려움과 다루는 언어 자체의 어려움 때문에 상당히 어려운 작업이 된다. 기술 문서의 작성에서는 문서의 독자, 페이지의 형식, 문법이나 구두점의 사용법, 정치적 요소들이 고려되어야 한다. 이중에서 독자에 대한 고려가 제일 중요한 것 같고 다음과 같은 질문에 답을 할 수 있어야 한다: 누가 이 문서를 읽을 것인가? 주제와 관련하여 무엇을 알고 있는가? 문서는 왜 읽고 어떻게 읽을 것인가? 이 질문들은 기술 문서에서 어느 정도의 배경지식이 담겨야 하고, 어떤 용어들을 정의하여 사용하여야 하는지 알려준다. 또 문서 작성에서 스타일은 세 가지 요소로 나뉘어 진다. 문장의 구조, 사용하는 문장, 그림이나 표의 배치. 위 고려 요소를 잘 생각해서 바람직한 스타일로 글을 작성하는 것이 기술적인 문서를 효과적으로 작성하는 방법이 될 것이다.



“A Dwarf who loved Snow White” is the first play that I have ever seen. The play is running at You Theater in Chungdam-dong, Seoul. It has garnered tremendous popularity since its first performance in May of 2001. It has been playing more than 800 times and getting more than 300,000 attendances. This performance is based on the well-known fairytale “Snow White”. The play delivers the previously untold love story of “Bandal”, one of the seven dwarfs, who loved the princess but could not express his feelings. In the play, only seven actors and actresses perform all rolls: seven dwarfs, princess, prince, villages, stepmother, etc. Writer Seo Kwnaghyun wrote the original play in 2001, director Park Sunggul is staging, and Kwan,Hukmi acts as “Bandal” who is the hero.
Although it was successfully finished at the last performance in June of 2004. You Theater decided to restage the play after repeatedly receiving calls from people who wanted to see the performance. You Theater updated the play to use more sophisticated stage props and costumes for the upcoming performance schedule. Then the performance has been restaged since Jul 8, 2005.
The play depicts seven dwarfs and Snow White, who comes to “Misty Forest” to escape from her wicked stepmother. The youngest dwarf, Bandal, devotedly helps Snow White but eventually couldn’t say his love. The noble gestures of Bandal, who could not express his true feelings for Snow White, the expressive choreography, and emotional melodies all create a memorable performance.
I don’t know what is a good acting because that I have seen only one play and I don’t have rich knowledge. However, the actors and actresses acting impressed me and showed me invisible things. The play was composed under a picture frame that the seven dwarfs played their ancestor’s famous story, related to the “Snow White”. Sometimes “Ggokisul”, who is one of dwarfs, acted the prince, “Noulsup”, who is another dwarf, performed the Snow White. The other dwarfs also changed their roll from dwarf to villages in the middle of play. So I could become aware of the play’s possibility to perform variously. It was enough interesting that I should imagine that there were invisible dwarfs who were acting other rolls. “Bandal” was dumb. He could not say anything but dance to show his emotion and feeling. The acting without speech made me concentrated to his face and motion and the choreography was very smooth and expressive. Furthermore, the other player also showed me great performance.
In other hand, I was impressed by using props and some effective scenes. I have never imagined how could express an invisible wind and a raining lake. They shook a ribbon for the wind and they waved a blue large fabric for the raining lake. The director managed the play well organized: the seven players continuously moved on the stage and made the audiences absorbed in the play. The last scene was awesome. Suddenly “Bandal” appeared behind of a screen that had been back of the stage during the play. Because he was spotlighted by several lights behind of the screen, we could see him among a lots of misty flower through the thin screen. It had a great effect to amaze us. The director might intend to surprise the audiences and he succeeded.
I already knew the story, “Snow White”, and the actors and actresses loudly spoke. In addition to it, the whole script didn’t use complex and difficult expressions, so I could easily understood the dialogs. For a moment, I thought that the production was surely made for children. Occasionally, they smoothly sang with a sweet music. It could deliver me unspoken thoughts of “Bandal” and it explained me about some situations.
I want to recommend my friend to go to see this production with his or her honey. The play would give a warm impression and help to feel love stronger. And I also wish to recommend family include children to go. Because it is easy to understand and enjoy the play and it would teach the children something about devoted love. Nowadays people lost their pure and devoted love in their heartlessness modern life. If some body see Bandal’s love, they could find what is a true love and they could know the dumb love is stronger than others.
September 7, 2005
  Today I took a class, English through drama in advanced English, which is the first time to learn about play and to play some story. Teacher wrote the title of the story on the board. It was “Star Taxi” which was two guys’ dialog. One of them was Tony Gaglioni who was a gangster and another was Lick who was an acting student. The dialog was really short but I thought the dialog would be continued to next class. We practiced a little because there was not enough time, however it was quit funny and exciting. It’s my first experience in a drama that I had hardly known and I had never seen. By the reason of the curiosity about unaware thing, I want to know more and practice more. I feel that I will enjoy this class.

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